Hi everybody,

Today I started on a track, and I thinks it sounds nice. But I really think it misses something, but I don't know what.

Can you guys help me out?

Link: Theran - Demo 11-03-2008

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Nice kick... Effects and filtered lead-ins are a plus. The arp sounds somewhat dry and simple to me.

The bassline is a little drowned... just a little. It has a rolling flavor to it, but it does subtract from the kick a little. You could rescue it by laying a bass with more mid-frequencies in it -- maybe. It's all up to you, I'm a subjective reviewer, nothing more.

Good luck... keep mixing.

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Thanks for your reaction.
The arp indeed is a bit dry, it was just to get things started.

What you said about the bass is true, although there are already 3 different basslines in it (low-mid-high), maybe I should try out my equaliser to boost some of the mids. The mid bass is also sidechained, that could be the problem, I could also try lowering the ratio of the sidechain.

You got me working

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Veghel uhmmm.........That's only 3km away from my home.

This is not bad. I agree with the comments from B_Man, keep working on it.

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Thank you for your reaction!
So near Veghel? Where do you live?

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