Descendance - nice build up until 1:46 mark. Its here that you need to do something different. You need something stronger in here to keep the tune driving along. Breakdown is a bit flat, again perhaps a stronger element is needed instead of the "wah" type sound used throughout the tune. Overall, I think you need to remove this "wah" type noise throughout the tune and replace it with something stronger, you have a good base to build on. And try to make the tune sound more 3d, it sounds a bit flat overall!

But still, better than anything I can produce!