im hearing a lot of josh wink influence in the first section here man. i really like it.

nothing i would change. id just work on the mixing so the track has the power for a dance floor. very deep and sophisticated. layer another more middy kick on top o nthe one you are using for a bit more attack maybe?

you havea good grasp of arrangement, and your breakdowns are really really good. main break is huge man. melodies and atmosphere are top dollar. its when the kickdrum comes in that things get muddy. try and eq your kick and use some sidechaining. the kick is the only thing giving you trouble really.

rich
ps. you might like my recent track down the list. i hear m.i.k.e influence in your melodies..

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wow... an actual reply... lol. i didn't expect that. thank you very much... and sadly... the rns file was lost on my old harddrive... i was lucky enough to have this tune on my ipod when my last comp crashed... =o( so there's nothing i can do to change it.


and where on that webpage can i find your music?

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Hi ther man.

what a shame!

what bitrate is the mp3 you have of this tune? i might be able to tweek it a bit and layer a kick on top to open it up a bit and add more punch.

there is a thread title called 'richard gale - omnibus VII' further down the list on this forum

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i think either 160 or 192... =o/

nothing amazing... =oP

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Fractured - Between The Lines
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Aesthetic Perfection - Pale
Fractured - Try To Forget
Antichristus - James Addiction (Remix)
Distimia - Vile
Re-Agent - Brain Death (Fractured Remix)
PreEmptive Strike 0.1 - Symbiosis Denied
Lastboss - Parralax Scrolling
Grendel - Judged Ones (Fractured Remix)

check your pm's

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