heres a track ive just finished, any feedback would be mint, cheers

http://www.speedyshare.com/676857196.html

Andy

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Last edited by djandymac on Aug-07-2008 at 13:52

production wise , i cant pick up any bad things
Very comfortable to listen too

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cheers mate, seems im finally gettin the hang of things lol

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cool ,lol
i like tracks that i can listen while driving (as i work 11 miles away) and this dose sound like a good drive along track

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Hey Andy,

The production is pretty nice, I don't really like the melody of the main lead but that's just my opinion.

Here are some suggestions:
- I think this track needs tighter and bit harder kick, one that punches right thru if you no what I mean.
- As I'm listening on my headphones now, I can't really make a good judgement of it, but I think you could try to make that sub deeper, It seems to me that you track can use some more lower frequencies.

But overall, pretty nice track! Good job!

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lol funnily enough i actually cut the lower frequencies (20-50Hz). ill wack them back up n see if theres much difference.

cheers for the comment bud

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What always works for me is apply a bassbooster on the subbass, and boost it around 60Hz, the track will sound deeper.

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cool, will bare that mind mate, cheers

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just updated the sample, check it out

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Not my style, but pretty pleasant to listen to. Breakdown is definitely too long for my taste; it kills the energy for me.

The sounds you have in there are nice, but all of them are really commonly used. It would be good if you could add something to make the track stand out more.

The kick sounds a little low in the mix to me for this style of trance.

I enjoyed this track. I agree that the kick could use a little more balls, but if you left it alone I'd still dig it. Its not a very energetic song, but its great sunrise material.

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