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mfitterer1
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2008
Location: Oregon
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It sounds like a good melody but imo the instruments need changing massively. To me good creative idea and flow! I just think it sounds slightly generic. Just my 2 cents though
Take care
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Aug-18-2008 06:00
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derail
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2007
Location: Canberra, Australia
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There's a lot of nice touches, but overall it's not flowing in a cohesive, satisfying direction. It goes from one chord to the next and shows signs of building and relieving harmonic and melodic tension, but doesn't pull it together in one satisfying overall progression.
Good moments though...you'll find spots for them in future songs no doubt.
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Aug-18-2008 06:59
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