Hi everyone its been a while since i posted something here, but i thought the more native english speakers among you could help me out a bit on this one, its a vocal track, my vocals its a very personal song i wrote, so i would really like a review on how the vocals sound and any comments on other elements are sure welcomed too...

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there is also an instrumental, if anyone wants to hear it too say so and ill up it too.

Thanks in advance, Sagy.

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intreasting bassline and the same goes for the vocal sounds like things where put together with glitch and bassis,osc,synths. and the problem with vocal track's the tend to be a bit wirey so i would say do a bit more with the pads you used just needs a bit more beef to the track all in all good.

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Originally posted by airwalker1 intreasting bassline and the same goes for the vocal sounds like things where put together with glitch and bassis,osc,synths. and the problem with vocal track's the tend to be a bit wirey so i would say do a bit more with the pads you used just needs a bit more beef to the track all in all good.

i didn't understand what is "wirey" and what more are you suggesting with the pads?

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No comments? it can't be that bad...

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Originally posted by Vortex_SA No comments? it can't be that bad...

Its not , but i can see where airwalker is coming from, the pads at 1 min plus could be more epic and wider.

As for 'wirey' i think he means that the edge of the vocals could be softened to lose the computery sound of them.

Again at 3.00mins if that pad/s were wider.

Other than that , everything sounds in order and done well.

Personally , i would turn this into a full on trancer, but then again i wanna turn everything into a 97-99 full on trancer!

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Originally posted by adi_hanson Its not , but i can see where airwalker is coming from, the pads at 1 min plus could be more epic and wider. As for 'wirey' i think he means that the edge of the vocals could be softened to lose the computery sound of them. Again at 3.00mins if that pad/s were wider. Other than that , everything sounds in order and done well. Personally , i would turn this into a full on trancer, but then again i wanna turn everything into a 97-99 full on trancer!

there is an instrumental version with fuller and harder melody, i just like the tech stuff better

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i would really apreciate if someone took a listen to the vocals see if they come across as understandable, im having a hard time judging im not a native english speaker..

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what i ment was you have a good idea for a track.It just needs beefing up a bit.I like the vocal but if your looking to make it more better to understand then take out the fx your using now,witch im guesing is glitch.But as it stands the vocal sound cool.maybe it's just me but im allways looking for that edge and so i think you need ot work on the pads as there's no riff to move things a long.sorry for the late feedback been doing some hardcore studying.

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Originally posted by airwalker1 what i ment was you have a good idea for a track.It just needs beefing up a bit.I like the vocal but if your looking to make it more better to understand then take out the fx your using now,witch im guesing is glitch.But as it stands the vocal sound cool.maybe it's just me but im allways looking for that edge and so i think you need ot work on the pads as there's no riff to move things a long.sorry for the late feedback been doing some hardcore studying.

man i think it may not be your style really, there is atast one riff running all along the sample, im asking if the vocals are understandable, did you understand? im loving the way the track is now, i just want to know what others think of it... but i took your comments into serious consideration, thanks!

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come on guys some feedback please, nobody told me if he understood the lyrics...??

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Originally posted by Vortex_SA come on guys some feedback please, nobody told me if he understood the lyrics...??

yes the vocal sounded fine was able to hear what was said but remember if you use fx there will be parts that will sound diffrent(off corse).hope this helps?

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Originally posted by airwalker1 yes the vocal sounded fine was able to hear what was said but remember if you use fx there will be parts that will sound diffrent(off corse).hope this helps?

yes it helps greatly thanks

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