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here we go :-
the synth over the intro beats from 0.00 to 0.30 is a little harsh , either needs softening or a bit of reverb and stereo separation.
After 30 secs , that backing synth sounds like the good old days.
when the main lead comes in , i can hear the effects stop , and it dosnt sound wide enough.
the bass and buildup sounds good.
I think the spread is too harsh on one of the lead synths after that
structurally it sounds fine.
overall , i think you have a tidy little tune here.Obviously your not finished with it yet , and after all the tweaking i think you should re upload.
EDIT:-
I would work hard on this tune and get it polished off.
must be the 15th time ive listened to it now
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Last edited by adi_hanson on Oct-24-2008 at 19:49
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