http://www.soundclick.com/djblorgpulkfplorksickle

The song is the top on the list-- "Ahava-Happiness Condensed"

Please do me a favor and critique it--for my sanity--some have said that this is one of the best songs they've heard in a long time, but others don't seem to like something about it....I want to know what you think.


I want to get this signed soon if I can--do you think this is realistic?




PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS--any bit of criticism will help me

I like the groove. I like the atmosphere. I like the production. It's good.

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Sebastian Zander - Hotel Chaplin
Sebastian Zander - Set Two [Electro/Tech House and Trance of some sort]
Paulo Da Costa - AVGN [Prog. House](128kbps])

Great track m8.

I definitely think it could be signed.

melodic good track,

the percussion can be much more, to be a great tech trance trance, it should have more elements

what especially drew my attention was a particular irritating snare patern: High snare, low snare, highsnare

The whole mixdown sounded a bit muddy to me

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I'd tend to agree about the mudiness.

needs more work on the final sound for me
but, the idea its pretty good
its true, work more on the perclines , make em more dynamic
the pads are pretty nice

in the bridge, that guitar/piano sounds good, but... meaby a lil bit to simply? it sound that u used the arpeggiator , it sounds good, but it can be better (very very personal opinion)

well done! =) nice track u make here
it worth the 3 month effort

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So Serene

I think its grat and you should release it. its better than some of Armins or Tiestos latest stuff. Geez some of u guys will never make it the way you obsess. its just music FFS.

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Originally posted by goodtime Geez some of u guys will never make it the way you obsess. its just music FFS.

He asked for our opinion and he got mine (artist 2 artist).
He can choose to either ignore our advice or not, that's up to him.
It's easy to write that his song was great, but that wouldn't help him when labels would reject his song, doesn't it?

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any label that rejects this song is dumb, or has ulterior motives for rejecting it, I think if you listen to the shit that gets released you will know.

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You said you worked on this song everyday for 3 months, and I believe you. Only thing that needs to be improved is the clarity of the mix, really. The foundation of the track is strong, which is a good thing. Just work on finding a way to make the mix sound as professional as possible.

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No question you could get this signed. As others have said work on the mix and varition on some percs. But to be honest its far off, overall the track is a great melodic track. Good work dude

Everyone it has just come to my attention that this dude is actually already a very famous producer and we have all been had!

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