A while back i made a track called elementia and someone said it would be better if it had no 4x4 beat and just left alone. So i set to work and smoothed off some of the sounds and tweaked it a little bit.

i can hear a few bits clipping , but other than that i thinks is nearly finished.

Anyways heres the link

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The melody and sound is quite lovely. Interesting choice.
I guess constructivly only thing I can suggest is possibly some more minor/subtle effects and sounds to come through at random points in the track.

Although it would seem personal taste, as I do like the movement of the track in its simplicity. Doing this might possibly disturb that feel - Might be a challenge to do so.

Lovely sounding track.

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Have to agree, this has a nice relaxed "spacey" sound to it. I think it works fine as it is, although it does drag a bit in the second half when there's nothing new going on. I think you could either shorten it a little or else put a bit more variation toward the end.

cheers for the comments ,

But i dont want to alter the tune as mentioned before enough to ruin it. Maybe a few subtle sweeps?

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Yeah, that would do it I think.

yea, sweeps. and very minimal sounds. because of how the song is you would notice even the slightest sound even if it is only quiet/subtle

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