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Alright first of, I have to say that I'm impressed with the soundquality. I won't give any other compliments, since that wouldnt be a great help anyway .
First thing I notice that the volume of the kick is too low, either that, or it's drowning in the bass. If it's the last thing, there's not much you can do about it but try to EQ it to sound clearer.
The chords you use are really attractive to the ears, the only thing that keeps this track from actually being 'commercially' releasable is the squarish highnote lead that sounds like it's arpeggiated?. The notes don't really 'follow' the chords that you layered them on very well. Alright, they sound ríght, but not nice as you would expect them to.
Second, but thats entirely what I would do, there's a TB303-like synth you use that only plays two notes, and the filter comes completely off at 2:24. I would focus alot more on that.
Like 3:01, that's what I would make the main part like, because it's sounds really trendy, edgy and special.
Good luck with it!
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