Hey mate, really not bad for only 6 months producing.

Apart from the high staccato-ey synth that pans from right to left in the intro, most of the track seems fairly centered. Work on spreading most of your sounds and filling all the stereo field.

Unfortunately I'm listening on headphones here, so I can't provide too detailed mixing advice. The levels seem reasonably good. Overall the sounds are slightly dry, set up your best reverb on a group or fx channel in cubase, and send varying levels of different tracks to it.

The main synths are obviously too dry, definitely send to some reverb. main synths usually require loads of detailed fx work to really make them sparkle and be somewhat .. special. Try duplicating a track, and heavily affecting the copy - then bury the copy somewhere in the mix so you can hear it, but not too obviously. this can give sparkle, make the sound evolve, etc. The only limit is your imagination, cpu power and resolve

Overall nice work though, keep it up and keep finishing those tracks! Completing tracks is the sure way to get better, so keep up the good work.

___________________

Monsoon - Astrosurf

ive just finished listening to your track pal, it sounds like to me a really good effort considering you only been producing 6 month, i dont know your musical backround but id guess you know your ur stuff about music and your clever! if you want give us a p/message ill help you if i can(advice an all that) im having a break from my most recent project at moment

___________________
http://www.facebook.com/pobsky
http://twitter.com/pobsky

ive just finished listening to your track pal, it sounds like to me a really good effort considering you only been producing 6 month, i dont know your musical backround but id guess you know your ur stuff about music and your clever! if you want give us a p/message ill help you if i can(advice an all that) im having a break from my most recent project at moment

___________________
http://www.facebook.com/pobsky
http://twitter.com/pobsky

hi guys,


thanks for your replys, i really appreciate it as I am new here and i expected nothing back! I know I have a lot to learn, this track has no EQ or effects on it at all as I am yet to learn how to use these too methods! chrisspob - I have PM you mate as far as my musical expierence goes its limited, i did piano lessons years ago and ive forgotten most of it! me clever? im a scouser mate I dont think so! LOL. However, I would really appreciate any addtional adivce you can offer, I have been told that the people on this forum know there shit and if you are giving me good feedback then im flattered. pho mo - again thanks for you responce although i must confess I am clueless as to how i got about doing what youve suggested! I guess it will come with time and practice! THANKS BOYS!

___________________
Cheers,

SG