Hello Guys!

I want to ask you for a feedback of my first self-made track called "Broken Nails". I do not want to tell you any details but leave you alone with it, i will say something after some feedbacks. I produce since half a year spending much time in it.

Software:
Ableton Live 7, Massive, DJ-Headphones as ..... wtf does "abhöre" means in english??? the thing the sound comes out ^^


thanks in advance

cheers

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Last edited by tobaddiction on Apr-23-2009 at 17:30

edit: i am sorry but i did not know that you have to be registrated to hear the song. i will upload it to another plattform...

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Tobaddiction - Serious Progress >< Every 2nd Thursday 6-7 pm cet on globalbeats.fm >< myspace

you can listen to the song in 128 kb and in a cutted version on my myspace-music page which i have created today...

http://www.myspace.com/tobaddiction

cheers

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Tobaddiction - Serious Progress >< Every 2nd Thursday 6-7 pm cet on globalbeats.fm >< myspace

the first body after the swoosh was kind of long. a little too long. it had no direction. but during the second body with the other elements it starts getting kind of good. maybe u need to re arrange it?

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I need more friends who appreciate EDM.

thank you for your feedback.

the break lasts for 1:30, maybe that would be fine if i would find some "direction" as you said, new elements fitting in the break... i have to try.. thank you

but first i need other feedbacks

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Tobaddiction - Serious Progress >< Every 2nd Thursday 6-7 pm cet on globalbeats.fm >< myspace

ehmm, no i don't have any idea

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Tobaddiction - Serious Progress >< Every 2nd Thursday 6-7 pm cet on globalbeats.fm >< myspace

Click the share button, above the file, then highlight the script, copy that onto your clip-board, and paste it, here.



Abhor means to hate, btw. I do not abhor your song but I do think it could be developed a lot further.

It's a pleasant listen, however and the mix is well balanced.

thank you!

i will rearrange this track this weekend....

cheers

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