sup guyzzz

well first off... is this already a song? haha... the main melody after I made it sounded really familiar and in all honesty it's just what came out

secondly, your thoughts... too boring? too ____? leme know i'd really appreciate it guys!

keep in mind it's a work-in-progress


Thanks so much,
Ian

http://www.ianbuzz.com/fa09.mp3http://www.ianbuzz.com/fa09.mp3

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It starts of nicely.

The highs are a little on the shrill end. Esp. shakers and hats.

I think the bass-line could use some more grit and presence - it sounds very anemic.

Nice progression, after the bass-line gets introduced.

A few more parts could be added to really round out but keep the hook, where it's at.

Nice modulation on the lead-hook, along with a very cool progression.


Could easily love this tune. Nice work, so far. Looking forward to the finished product.

Hey thanks Eddie!

Yeah get'n used to my new monitors so i've gotten "too much shaker" b4 so i think i REALLY need to turn it down now

I see what you're talking about on the bass line, I had a really gritty sawtooth in there in an earlier version but I think it sounded too stereotypical-electro-house so I took it out, maybe i can tastefully re-add it in here and there

Thanks for your suggestions, they're all valid points and I'll definitely keep them in mind

I'll let you know when a "final ver" is done... oh it's never done haha

take care man!

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Couldn't get the file!!!

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