Nice. Not much I can say in terms of critique, I thought the noise sweep in the beginning was too high and unprocessed, but other than that it was nice. I didn't notice anything really wrong with the arrangement, in fact I will probably keep this song and listen to it for leisure.

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Thanks for the feedback man, yeah about the sweep, I didnt do anything to it, except cut some of the lows. Lol I just thought it sounded pretty cool :-D.

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I think it's sounds pretty nice, but I think you sounds can use more fx like reverb or delay, it sounds pretty dry now.

But great work!

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Yeah I dont think I have any reverb in the track. Only on the square pluck that plays thorughout the beginning and end.

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