Awesome! One thing I can say is that to me it sounds like the snare is too loud, and the synths could use more "air"

really good though, engaging from the moment it starts

still listening.. .the second element of the highs just came in. Actually it sounds to me like the percussion in general is just too loud, save the kick. Musically I like this and I think it's delightful, from a production standpoint I think it can use some work.

Also... does the bassline change pitch at the very end? Is this part of a mix?

thx dude,


nope it doesnt change pitch, and its not part of a mix

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is that one better?


http://www.djyenn.com/YENN-Still_Untitled_REDONE.mp3

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Have you got studio monitors yenn?

yes why?

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Just wondering. Yes, the second take sounds much better. I'd say it's done.

cool


thx 4 ur time dude

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yenn this track is cool, deserves more feedback imo good luck

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men, really like your trakcs very clear sound

thx a lot guys : ))

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