The melodies and sounds in this were pleasant enough, but nothing about it really stood out to me. The stutters at the end of the breaks, the kick buildup, the synth sounds you used, everything just sounded so typical. You obviously have an ability to write decent melodies, make good sounds, and make a nice clear mix, but I think this track needs some more work if you want to set it apart from the pack...

yea thanks for commenting, any ways i really tried to set the outline for a track. i really worked on the mixing. ill go home today and work on this track some more, tweak it, maybe change the melody and make the buildup more exciting.

been producing for about 5 months so im still trying to figure out my own sound. Anyone else care to comment please do.

bump, any other comments?

agree with the other post, good melody but nothing really special about the track. the bass drum filtering at the start doent sound right.