Here it is.. After quite a long time of work on it.
Tell me what you think
WARNING : It is not mastered.. So... yeah.

IceWater.mp3 - 23.97MB (320kps)

Last edited by IceColdWater on Sep-24-2009 at 07:37

Posted a youtube link , for those who are too lazy to download a 23 mb file

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JESks7ACSdU

Hey man, another nice one from you. Really like that squelchy insidious bass effect coming in during the buildup and continuing through the track, nice touch. Kick and basslines very clean, no problems there at all. Main lead synth is a little thin for my liking and sounds a little oldskool as a result, but the melody is cool -- uplifting but with a dark twist here and there to keep it grounded. The twinkly accompanying synth is nice and sounds very pretty in the ambient section of the break, but like I said the main lead could be fleshed out a bit and maybe the track could use a nice thick pad to help this? Nice work once more!

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Originally posted by novastorm Hey man, another nice one from you. Really like that squelchy insidious bass effect coming in during the buildup and continuing through the track, nice touch. Kick and basslines very clean, no problems there at all. Main lead synth is a little thin for my liking and sounds a little oldskool as a result, but the melody is cool -- uplifting but with a dark twist here and there to keep it grounded. The twinkly accompanying synth is nice and sounds very pretty in the ambient section of the break, but like I said the main lead could be fleshed out a bit and maybe the track could use a nice thick pad to help this? Nice work once more!

Thanks for your feedback novastorm
By the main lead synth , are you referring to that squarry lead , or the gated supersaw sound?
If it is the gated saw , yeah I admit it does sound kinda thin.. At first I was looking for that Aly & Fila's remix of Back To You Saw sound.. But alas.. Even when I push detune to the limit it still sounds kinda thin
As for that square lead.. Nothing I can say about that.. Im just not experiened with squares.


Thanks for the feedback once again!

this track is outstanding!and its my amateur tune of the week for my amateur spotlight segment on my radio show this saturday.if you dont mind im going to play it and give out the information about the track after ive aired it during the broadcast(title,producer,etc)

good stuff you got here man keep it up!

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Originally posted by bigjimslade002 this track is outstanding!and its my amateur tune of the week for my amateur spotlight segment on my radio show this saturday.if you dont mind im going to play it and give out the information about the track after ive aired it during the broadcast(title,producer,etc) good stuff you got here man keep it up!

Im really glad you like the song!
And I dont mind at all , if you want to play the song on your radio show , feel free to go aheard
But just a note.. This song is not really mastered.. So its not really loud compared to other trance songs..
And oh ya , the song's name is "Cold Fear" , not "Untitled" lol!
I named the song "Untitled" at first , because I didn't really had a name in mind for the track at that time.. and the name "Cold Fear" only hit me when I exported the track.. And by that time.. I was too lazy to change the song's title.. lol!

Last edited by IceColdWater on Sep-23-2009 at 14:15

hey just listened to it in my mix on my playback.no volumes problems to me sounded fine!and i named the track as "cold blue" cuz thats what you have listed at the top.

but im going to play it again next week and ill list it as cold fear if you want!great track man it sounds great and mixed well.

and just as important you dont mind sharing the track!!!!theres a lot of music in here but a lot of people dont want people to download it,just listen to it.i pass up a lot of threads with some good tunes for that reason.DONT BE AFRAID TO SHARE PEOPLE!!!

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Opps.. I cant believe how I blur I can be to forget to change the song's title at the top.. -_- (I was actually gonna change the 'blue' to 'fear' .. )

Fairly generic. A few sqeaky lead sounds here and there - such as the bell things in the intro.

Quite good mix overall, but just too generic and old school.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Fairly generic. A few sqeaky lead sounds here and there - such as the bell things in the intro. Quite good mix overall, but just too generic and old school.

Yeah I know.. Its kinda generic to be exact.
But old school? Hmm I dont know what causes that..?

i like it but it´s too long i guess

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Originally posted by Lars Sanchez i like it but it´s too long i guess

Yup.. Its really long.. I guess I made the intro too long..