Registered: Apr 2009
Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
This approaching Daylight... (Work in progress)
Hey guys, thought I'd share a track I've been working on. It's fairly simple and still needs a lot of work.
Any ideas/comments/advise etc will be welcomed.
The main area I'm gonna try and improve is the flow of the track as it progresses and I'm going to overhaul the arrangement. This version is missing special effects/atmospheric sounds so any help in that area will be appreciated!
The clap/snare sound is pretty weak and I think a more punchy sample would sound a lot better.
The intro is quite boring with not much going on. That long gap with white noise certainly doesn't help and that bass coming in quite abruptly.
You should take the synths from the breakdown and play them more throughout the whole track. It would make things more interesting.
Keep working on it!
Oct-18-2009 20:25
Wayne_B
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
Thanks for the advise, will see how I can improve it I want to use a more interesting sweep sound for the gap at the beginning but haven't come up with anything yet..
Cheers!
