Hi all , been at the production lark quite a bit recently since i was made redundant(unemployed).

This is the first draft of a tune i made and its quite unpolished and im having nightmares after the break , so im just wondering if you can lend an ear and make a few suggestions for me?

as usual its a full 320 mp3

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Cheers in advance.

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I think the track is at it's strongest about 1/4 the way through when you have the double offbeat bassline going, it's quite chilled at that point and could be re-introduced after the break with a nice wide pad.

the piano sound is a tiny bit harsh but you've mentioned it's a rough mix so not really an issue right now.

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