track is unavailable, please post it somewheres else i wanna hear it!

Just had a listen , and the first thing that shouts out that is everything is too raw.

It seems there is no space , stereo widening or reverb put onto this track. And eventually the mono becomes quite distracting.

How long have you been producing?

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