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pkcRAISTLIN
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would you call the police?

One of my best friend’s employees just circulated this poem around the office. I suggested he call the police, because it looks fairly self-explanatory to me!

quote:

Stranded in darkness I stand,
Alone and tormented,
Seven who have dared to torment,
Seven to reap what they have sowed.

Three more to come,
Three who will dare to try,
Where seven have failed,
To bind me against my will.

Where bribes have failed.
Lies and deception they weave.
In the hope that those around me,
continue to do as they please.

A truth that I know.
A truth that I can't speak.
A truth that needs to be told.

When you perceive that a network surrounds you and only you and that no one around you can talk to you about it. It becomes one of the most loneliest experiences, in a sense, a darkness. The greatest problem I found is that I'm afraid to speak about it, out loud. My other fears are of a life bind to a society and a government that I don't want to be bound to. Since it's only perception, there is no proof to what I've written, no certainty, only some doubt.

However if I am right, what I need, what I long for, is not only the destruction of the network, but to also have all my liberties restored.


That just reads like someone preparing to go postal imo.

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nefardec
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w ashley is a better writer than i gave him credit for.

sounds like a lord of the rings poem though

seven rings for the blah blah blah


$10 says when he does it he does it with an elven scimitar

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Sushipunk
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Lol

Yeah, definitely weird as fuck. I'd call the cops if it were one of my employees.


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igottaknow
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I would call an English professor. Maybe with a little luck he'll be able to help him improve his proses.

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i say just keep quiet about it


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its poetry
you dont even know if thats how HE feels.

real artist dont worry about how they feel they write about how someone else may feel in a certain situation.

perception is a wonderful thing

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Why the fuck would you considering calling the cops over a poem????


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infiniteJEST
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It's clearly an analysis of Wienerschnitzel's 2 for $3 deal.


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i would shoot him in the face even if it is innocent because poetry is for faggots.


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pkcRAISTLIN
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Why the fuck would you considering calling the cops over a poem????


Yeah, you should wait until after the massacre to call them.

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D-res
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Just give the guy a tin foil hat

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Oh! season of mists;
And mellow fruitlessness.


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