Let me know what you think.

Note:
There are two spots the volume drops off. You'll notice them.

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ATB -Let u go
Iio - Rapture(riva edit)
Dj Encore - I see right through you
Lasgo - something

The best vocal tunes on LI RIP(2001-2002)

Don't know if you're going to like this feedback, but...

What are you using for strings? It sounds like a Casio. Get a better string VST. They have no dynamics, it sounds bad. The composition is OK but the string instrument is terrible. Overall the composition is decent but the production is weak.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Don't know if you're going to like this feedback, but... What are you using for strings? It sounds like a Casio. Get a better string VST. They have no dynamics, it sounds bad. The composition is OK but the string instrument is terrible. Overall the composition is decent but the production is weak.

Thanks for the criticism. What you said is I got the melody chops but need to learn how to maximize the quality of it. If you heard my first tunes then you can hear an improvement up to this tune. I guess with more knowledge of how the program(Fruit Loops Studio) works will better help me do that. As of now I am just understanding how to tweak samples to give it that trance type sound and in and out style.

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ATB -Let u go
Iio - Rapture(riva edit)
Dj Encore - I see right through you
Lasgo - something

The best vocal tunes on LI RIP(2001-2002)

I love the melody M8 but I agree with the strings. Still i love this track.

Listen to mine and tell me what you think of my strings i'm still learning to master lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LbW0dOKD2hU

Please give feedback

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Trance is Life, Life is Trance!!!

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Originally posted by jayjenks1992 I love the melody M8 but I agree with the strings. Still i love this track. Listen to mine and tell me what you think of my strings i'm still learning to master lol http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LbW0dOKD2hU Please give feedback

I guess you on a higher level of knowledge that mean on the production side. I wish I had some of those samples to work with. 9/10

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ATB -Let u go
Iio - Rapture(riva edit)
Dj Encore - I see right through you
Lasgo - something

The best vocal tunes on LI RIP(2001-2002)