any takers ? !

So far so good Craig - I will play it few more time friend and get back to you. Nice job - this is my first impression man.

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Hey Craig,

Really nice track with a lot of positive energy floating around it.
Break is awesome man, really enjoyed, with beautiful atmosphere and good selection of sound. Nice production after a small break (I didn't see you here for a few days/weeks) man. Great effort.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Hey Craig, Really nice track with a lot of positive energy floating around it. Break is awesome man, really enjoyed, with beautiful atmosphere and good selection of sound. Nice production after a small break (I didn't see you here for a few days/weeks) man. Great effort. Cheers

Thanks alot man! Yeah we moved house, so i havnt been able to get anything done, as always i appreciate your comments

i like the piano part. it really stands out.

Thanks FSP, it was originally a little more subdued in the mix but i thought it would sound better "out there" so to speak. Thanks again

When im home from work im going to check your track out too, as i dnt have sound on this pc

Bump

Anyone else have some feedback / criticism?

It will helo me alot in getting this and future tracks right

Thanks

The build down into the break works really well, but I'm not sold on the build-up back out of the break. It gets a bit messy imo. It could be that the quick comes in right quick like. You need that at the end of the build for sure, but I feel like it just hits really hard really fast.

The sequence seems right though, and nothing stands out as really going wrong in the track.

Loads of energy from the BPM and throbbing lower sections. I also feel like the sweep in the low end that sounds panned is a bit overpowering in the low end.


Hope you like the comments I made man. Feel free to hit me with a PM or anything (especially if you want to submit it for demo considerations).

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Solid track with good choice of sounds and well laid out.

I think the track could take a bit more delay on certain parts, probably stereo 4ths or 8ths. The reverb could be a bit lusher too as it sounds a bit metallic at the moment.

You've already got part of the lead sound on the off beat that's very apparent in the break. If you introduced a subtle offbeat bass note after the drop I thihk it would really push the track up to another level.

Nice work and congrats on getting setup again after the move!

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hi- really nice uplifting feel to the track from the jump man, good job. i do feel sorta like it looses momentum a little to abruptly aroun 1 min in.....just my opinion! really feelin the track tho...cudos : )

Thankyou everyone who posted a reply! Enjoyed reading each sets of feedback, and will work on a few things that were mentioned.

1 particular part i will rebuild is the build up after the break, i did notice i sort of rushed back into the chorus, maybe through excitement! But i will go over that once more and see what i can come up with.

Thanks again for all your positive words guys