Much better! I think the bass-line (you might try layering it) can come up a bit, but, really, in-so-far as something that got my attention, nicely done. Like the lead with the formant filter on it. The break's a little too long and I don't care for the cuts, although if you were to get a little more surgically glitchy with it, that might not be so bad. Keeping that lead in the same place, after the re-launch, doesn't really do the song any favors. It needs to do something else.






But still, much better.

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I thought this was really nice! To be honest I wasn't expecting much after Eddie's many pointed remarks towards you lol (he's being cruel to be kind trust me!) and I was pleasantly surprised. It sounds a little dated as far as the percussion goes, but sort of a nostalgic way - a nod to classic trance. But the wispy synths and pads that weave themselves around it do add a more modern touch. Some classy synths in there, reminded me of something Solarstone might play.

Yeah I think you can do without the cuts at 6:46 and the faded hang you've done at 6:49 sounds a little weird and doesn't create the drama you're going for. oops, that bassdrop sample at 4:40 ends way too abruptly, extend its tail out so it blends! But overall it's good - my main criticism is that it's too long, the build is about 2mins too long, same with the break - for this sort of track you need to keep the progression moving and say what you need to say in well under 8 minutes or a DJ won't be able to play it because the crowd will lose interest. Keep at it

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Thanks for the posting and I am happy that you guys liked the track. I will catch de comments about the details...and yes, I agree...these details need to be fixed, but I must confess that I've sent that version to the recording that wanted to sign it...whatever I will contact them to "refresh" the music catching these issues that I will fix... thanks a lot for the posting guys...

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