You're right. The breakdown really isn't very satisfying. First, ditch the shrill sound on the lead synth that comes in on the break. Keep the effects. Just get rid of that god-awful sound. Make it a sine-wave or something. Just a simple 2 to 3 oscillator sine-wave ever so slightly detuned, played about an octave or two lower than you had that fingernail on the chalk-board sound going at.

Other than that, however, this track has a lot of potential. You may want to build up, just a bit more before the break, but I do hope you'll finish it.

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cool thanks for the reply
i'll keep workin on it

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Well...personally I really liked the music...even with this breakdown...I imagined this being played on a club and sounded like cream cheese (it's a very good stuff for my taste)...just need to have more BPM...is too low...besides the rest is fine for me!

Congratulations.

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