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Listening to your original mix.
Hm.. sounds like a quite punchy kick and some nice sounds here, the bass is rocking. But I think you could be more artistic about the way you evolve the track though. In the beginning it seems like one element comes in after the other.
I also think you should experiment more with reverb on your sounds, to make it more atmospheric and full-sounding.
One of the sawplucks in the break hurts my ears in a way.. I think they're boosted a tad too much in the mid/high area.
Yeah.. automations would definitely help your track a lot. Filtersweeps. For now the only filter-sweep I can hear is on your lead-sounds. That's great, but you should definitely think about adding filtersweeps to alot more in your track  They make transitions smoother, like it is now the elements in your track just "appear" in the intro and then "disappears" near the outro.
In the climax the higher pitched are clashing a bit EQ-wise, try and make the important sounds have one part of the frequency-spectrum that only they dominate in, so that they get to stand out in the soundscape
Oh btw, people tend to mono their basses, to make the songs tighter... It sounds good that way. Personally I like to widen out some part of my bass-layers, but you should always keep the lowest end mono. Perhaps try using a sub-bass and make it mono?
You're definitely getting there though. Cheers!
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