Finally got my second track done. Took a bit longer than expected to finish this. Hope you enjoy it

Come So Near [Original Mix] by solitonbeam

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yIJ49Dm1b4k

i think the idea is good.. but the mix was very muddy.

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Originally posted by tatsama i think the idea is good.. but the mix was very muddy.

Yeah, ive been toiling away with the mix for a while, but its been taking a very long time so I figured I might as well put it out there first to get some feedback and then continue with it

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Originally posted by solitonbeam Yeah, ive been toiling away with the mix for a while, but its been taking a very long time so I figured I might as well put it out there first to get some feedback and then continue with it

Commenting on the mix from streams = total epic fail.

Moving on...to the track itself...

It sounds like typical prog.trance to me until the vocal sample, and then sorta...psy'ish.

The vocal sample sounds very infected mushroom...

Overall it's a nice piece and has a thumpin' bassline, good energy and good arping...but the originality seems a bit lacking. (at least to me...)

I hear alot of this sorta thing on Pandora. *shrug*

The mix overall actually sounds fine, as I have a pretty solid idea on what soundcloud typically does to a track.

Keep on it m8.

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Originally posted by theterran Commenting on the mix from streams = total epic fail. Moving on...to the track itself... It sounds like typical prog.trance to me until the vocal sample, and then sorta...psy'ish. The vocal sample sounds very infected mushroom... Overall it's a nice piece and has a thumpin' bassline, good energy and good arping...but the originality seems a bit lacking. (at least to me...) I hear alot of this sorta thing on Pandora. *shrug* The mix overall actually sounds fine, as I have a pretty solid idea on what soundcloud typically does to a track. Keep on it m8.

Thanks for the feedback. Only my 2nd song, so I guess ive still got some ground to push before I really hit my stride; still have got lots to learn

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Originally posted by solitonbeam Thanks for the feedback. Only my 2nd song, so I guess ive still got some ground to push before I really hit my stride; still have got lots to learn

Don't we all?