bass instrument doesn't sound quite right for some reason. the synth is cool but could use some reverb automation, if you brought it to the forefront more it would make a better lead sound. the bass just doesn't sit right though. It sounds really out of tune on that one note, kind of cringes. cool idea though, if you fix that

Funny you say that I used albino on that bass and I usually use logics ESM on every other track I've ever finished...

Def gonna look into fixing that thanks evolve!

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i think you need to work more on your perclines mate
the melo its good, very smiple
that bassline its to , trancy mate

these one needs a lot more athmospheric pads, sounds, samples etc

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I think this is rather plain right now. I quite like some of the elements I'm hearing, but as a whole I find it fairly unmemorable.

The structure felt totally lifeless and predictable to me. A bit too formulaic for my tastes.

6 months seems like an awfully long period to create music over. Unless you rarely touched the file, I'd probably leave it as it stands and begin something fresh.

Your other tune appealed to me a lot more! Keep creating, man.

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Originally posted by Owsey2008 6 months seems like an awfully long period to create music over. Unless you rarely touched the file

It was untouched up until yesterday!

Thanks for your comments everyone I will take into consideration your feedback and put that towards my next project

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