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TaylorR
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i don't think you should be focusing on mastering just yet.
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Oct-11-2010 15:15
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Zak McKracken
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what is mastering really? mixing? its pretty hard to know how well the master is when we cant compare to the original imo. if u want feedback on the mixing here it comes. the baseline is way too loud and subby. the kick is untight and the synths are too low and thin. the whole mix sounds like its played back on a PA system without midrange. also the reverb sounds too small and the sidechaining is overdonne. its a pretty bad mix imo. the synth sounds selected is also very dated and the whole track lacks identity somehow. i really like the chord progression and the vibe you are aiming for though, quite uplifting feel without being too cheesy. but u werent wondering about the actual track but the mix/master, so therefore my feedback is pretty harsh, just as the mix. hope it helps.
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Oct-11-2010 15:24
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KilldaDJ
birth.school.trance.death

Registered: Sep 2001
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Oct-11-2010 16:13
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Zak McKracken
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| quote: | Originally posted by theterran
Mastering is setting all of the tracks to equal loudness on a CD.
I haven't had the pleasure of tuning my tracks to a club, so yeah the reveerb is what I remember the veerb being like in large dance halls.
Mastering is also removing garbage and artifacts, doing your final EQ'ing, and doing the final compression and touchups on the track. A master will also add that extra depth, shine and clarity.
Nothing wrong with dated either. I like older trance sounds better than alot of the new garbage I've been hearing lately. And the ONLY thing I sidechained in there really was the crash and one synth...I've heard more liberal uses of it :P
And maybe a picture to help describe what I'm getting at : http://astro.uchicago.edu/~andrey/p...4/IMG_0192s.PNG
Cheers for the feedback...and the original IS there to compare with, so way to go guy. :P |
i didnt mean dated as in oldschool but as in like 2006 softsynths or something, but that wasnt so important. sorry i still dont see the original raw unmastered version, id love to hear it to compare. but i seriously think you should look at a few of the points i mentioned anyway. especially the eqing of your baseline and the thin sounding synths pluss the unfocused kick. it seems you have high-passed all your other elements but kick and base, and overdonne the eqing on the baseline. just trying to help.
i like your avatar though but your name should have been terranaut.
Last edited by Zak McKracken on Oct-11-2010 at 16:27
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Oct-11-2010 16:20
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Zak McKracken
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somehow i dont get the mastered version to play now, but i listened to the original and from what i can remember between the first listen(master) and this, i notice the same problems. too much eq on the baseline and to low/thin synths. also the hihats seems abit too much at the moment. im getting into the actual synth sounds after a few listen now though so it grows abit on me, they just need more body and presence, which is mixing, not mastering.
edit: i got to listen to both now, the unmastered version is alot better lol.
do u have a visual spektrometer(freq/amplitude) software or something? it would be rather clear whats missing using something like that at this point.
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Oct-11-2010 16:36
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