back to the drawingboard and been redoing all the melodies

mind u the mix sucks, so does the arrangement, it's nearly a way to introduce all elements. some lines to soft, bass maybe a bit hot, but i've got a little one crying for a bottle so need to hurry up

anyway listen to the track, the development, tell me what u like and don't like and i'll try to take it from there.


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Last edited by Raphie on Feb-21-2011 at 20:53

I really like the melody. It needs a more updated sound though in my opinion. What bpm is it (about 133?) I think it should be a little faster.

I have been trying HARD to put the name to the song this reminds me of. I finally recalled Scumfrog - Watersong. It's a classic so that is a good thing to be compared to. Now don't neglect the little one :P

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very nice! i like, i think the mix would be awesome with some vocals in it.

if you have time, will you comment on one of my tracks? thanks!

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Makes me think of 90s bubblegum pop. Like S Club 7.

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Kick is very mid clicky vengeancey, clap very basic and the bass drags on the track - it needs some small timing adjustment.

It does'nt sound as modern as other tracks of yours.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler It does'nt sound as modern as other tracks of yours.

Agree. My main critique of most the songs I have seen on this forum is that they don't sound current enough (and to some extent 'big' enough). That isn't a 'bad' thing neccesarily but if you are going for getting played by DJs it is. Other than that most have been well mixed, well composed, programmed well, ect. My tracks have the exact same problem.

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