http://soundcloud.com/tilda140/86668650-0476456678w754
woops, here it is..
86668650-0476456678w754 by tilda140

Will continue to work on this the next couple of days. Feedback welcome/helpful

Btw: I finished that last track Meant to be broken with my friend, PM me for a link =]

Not feeling this one in danceability terms, but maybe your'e not thinking so much about dance per see?

Some nice sounds in there, but overall not as favourable as your other tracks for me.

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Hmm, what is a turn off the most? I just thought it sounded kinda trancey. For me the drums are the weakest part. It would be nice to rework it for more dancability and keep the parts I like.

I really like the sidechained saw lead. The metallic sounding pluck was pretty awesome but it seemed to take up the same space as the saw lead, I was worried that all the sounds would be in that low-mid range, but then the brighter stabs came in and I liked them a lot. In my opinion this track needs drive; as Richard Butler said, this isnt something you could dance too. Although while i produce i dont really think such things as danceability, I like to here a good groove that gets my head bobbing. Groove and some drive and this would be an awesome track. Good work man, sounds really nice.

I can see what you mean. I think the drums are just hindering the drive. I feel like the synths move along quite well but get stuck in the mud. So thanks for checking it out guys, I see what you mean. I'm glad you dig some of the elements though. I like the saw, too. I was trying to be emotional but not too cheesy, y'know? I'm still open to other's thoughts as well so let me know guys, thanks.

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Originally posted by sicc this isnt something you could dance too.

I can dance to this. Hahaha


Some of the drive is coming from the mid bass. Especially when the mid bass leaps upward. Most of the rhythms are pretty plain. That pitched down FX sounds really out of place.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

I like this and hope it's on the list of stuff to finish. Really liking your ideas, here.

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Now with extra singles!
my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012

@BF, what timing on that fx? Not sure what you mean.

And thanks Eddie, with any luck I'll be back at it tonight.

I'm hearing a lot of good stuff here that's not quite pulling itself all together....yet.

Reverb work is very good, and i'm a bit of a sucka for good reverb work.

Will there be an update soon?!

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Yeah man, I have set aside this evening to work on it more. *puff puff*

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Originally posted by Evolve140 @BF, what timing on that fx? Not sure what you mean. And thanks Eddie, with any luck I'll be back at it tonight.

Right in the middle, it sounds like a turn table FX.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

Oh yeah, haha. It's kind of like a place holder. Doesn't serve much purpose.