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mathieu
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Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Montreal, Canada
Critique my (not commercial) hiphop beat

Hi everyone from the MD, anyone likes hip hop here? I know theres a special section for feedback but I figured id get better feedback here.

Anyways heres the track :


I know I dont post alot on here (almost never), but, I'd like your thoughts on this.
If anyone objects to me posting this kind of stuff here ill understand. I figured id get better feedback here since there prob are a couple hiphop fans in here and id prob get some deeper words than: ''its cool but i think you should put a supersaw on it''

PS: If (by miracle) anyone here wants to rap on it (if its even possible lol) drop me a message here or pm or whatever, ill supply.

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EddieZilker
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I like this, man. Very cool, jazzy chords and I like the rhythm, too.

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74

Here might be a better place for it (but I suspect you may have known that so do as you will).


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Zak McKracken
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cool soulfunk there dude. dont ruin it with vocals.

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mathieu
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Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Montreal, Canada

Thanks ! Yes i've posted it here on purpose. That stefan goldmann thread in the producers section inspired me to do so. I thought that some feedback from the people here might be interesting. Tho, I dont want to pollute this section with feedback requests. Gonna have to find a solution.

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Zak McKracken
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quote:
Originally posted by mathieu
Thanks ! Yes i've posted it here on purpose. That stefan goldmann thread in the producers section inspired me to do so. I thought that some feedback from the people here might be interesting. Tho, I dont want to pollute this section with feedback requests. Gonna have to find a solution.


make an alt and post it from that alt and say you just found it and love it and wonder if anyone else love it too lol. thats what others do.

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osterzone
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More reverb needed for the background wouldn't hurt.

Also the drums sound really artificial. What did you make this with?

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LAdazeNYnights
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Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Los Angeles, CA

i really dig it man nice work

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daphunky1
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Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Sask, Canada

I dig it. I don't know much an out technical production but the 3rd beat/note sounds a bit jarring when it is full on. Smooth that out a bit and other than that finish it off into a nice 3 minute track!

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