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Port12
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Aug 2011
Location: Cleveland, USA
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Very cool style, I like it!
In general the sounds are very well-chosen. I wasn't too fond of the snare that does the fill at 20 seconds. I love the overall atmosphere created by the synths and the sidechaining, etc.
My one real suggestion is to add some melodic/chord progression to the song. I'm the kind of guy who needs a song to be moving melodically to stay interested. Well, maybe not "needs;" I still think the song is good, but if the song had a catchy melodic progression with it's cool atmosphere and solid groove, I would really dig it quite a bit.
Hope that helps! Please post again if you make any changes to the song~
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Aug-21-2011 06:09
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kolleamm
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Mar 2010
Location: Los Angeles
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Very good advice!
Yea I knew that snare sounded a bit out of place.
I'm going to take your suggestion and also try and add a melody to the track.
Thanks again for the feedback I really appreciate it.
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Aug-21-2011 07:21
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kolleamm
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Mar 2010
Location: Los Angeles
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Alright everyone, the edited version of Trance Waves is ready, I kept everyone's advice close in mind while editing it too. I just wanna say thanks to all who commented and gave their opinions! I really appreciate it. I look forward to hearing what you think, here is the link.
http://soundcloud.com/amadeusbojiuc...-trance-waves-1
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Sep-06-2011 22:35
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