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JEO
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My attempt on some dnb(?)

JEOJ - WIP 25.8.11

You don't have to save it, most browsers should play it in their own player when you click it I'll put it into SC when I get out of school today.

Thoughts on the mix, composition and anything at all, please! It will be greatly appreciated.

D'n'b W.I.P. #1 by JEOJ

Edited: added the SoundCloud player.

Last edited by JEO on Sep-05-2011 at 12:58

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dr.america
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This sounds good, but i think if you lowered the mid-frequencies on the kick-drums , it would sound better

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JEO
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Thanks for your reply! Indeed kicks are where I suck the most ass. They always seem so boxy and flat, and I can't figure out how to make them translate to other systems; they sound excellent on my headphones.

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Lovely melodies actually, the basis of a fantastic atmospheric dnb track, but the bassline is just terrible. Drum 'n bass like this is all about the sub bass - you really want a deep bassline. The one you've got right now is puny. Some more interesting drum programming would be nice too.


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JEO
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Thanks for the feedback! It's really appreciated.

I do agree on the bassline. I'll work on it when I get some free time on my hands and update this thread. I've been thinking of adding a speech-sample of some kind and generally achieving a slightly dirtier sound.

I'm actually attending my first d'n'b-only-clubnight this weekend hoping to catch some good vibes for more inspiration.

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pretty cool, just listen to more of this stuff and you should be fine.

im also working on DNB of the same nature myself, im collabing with a good producer ;} pm me if you want to hear it.

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Cedric K.
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the melody is really awesome but as "dr.america" already mentioned, the perc. &kickdrum has a bit too much of the mid freq. ut to be honest, i think the bassline is nice and it fits. yea of course, there are other alternatives which might fit better but i think that this one does well too! the snare is perfectly chosen, i like it


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