hmmmmmm, nice try, but it needs abit of sorting out, sounds good at 1:24 till 2:10, and that rough synth line builds in, and its sounds abit mixed up, well with that guiltar-ey sound, it goes with the vocal but not with that guitary sound in maddonna (hope ya understand what i mean), maby the synth could be made to sound more euphoric, because that synth line you use sounds awful, good idea & everything but the bits i have commented on is good 
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