HELP! It sounds good to me but I just wanted to make sure that I didn't just subconsciously rip the melody from something else. If it's all good, then i'm going to run with it.

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Please let me know and thanks for the ears!

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It has a ring of familiarity to it but I think it's original. That said, you might try seeing if anyone down in the forum, below, recognizes it. I definitely like it, though. Very pretty.

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...hp?s=&forumid=2

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one of my friends accidently wrote 'Barracuda' by Heart, we jammed on it for like 15 minutes all like "this is awesome!" before realizing it :/


EDIT: This actually sounds like every song Coldplay has ever done

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Originally posted by meriter EDIT: This actually sounds like every song Coldplay has ever done

Well, now I feel a little trashy.

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Not a bad thing! I'm sure people will eat it up.

Tomo if you want some constructive criticism I'd say look for a more 'real' sounding piano voice

Hi Eddie, nice to run into you again. =) Meriter, would you happen to have any recommendations on the best sounding piano vst? Currently i'm just using Nexus but I am sure there are better and more expensive options.

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This sounds very polished and good to me - the piano whilst not the most realistic has a toy quality that for me suits the mood as is.

Make this into a monster track - can well imagine some husky vocals on this - Man or Woman.

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Piano sounds decent enough. The composition is pretty compelling, so it may be worth experimenting with the more real sound they mentioned. This works, though. Maybe a tad bit more compressed feel would squeeze it out more. You have a lot of room in those chords to experiment with counter point, so try to get more of a hook going. Sounds pretty nice.

It is the same chord progression as all these other songs

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pidokakU4I

Great Melody however!

I wasn't trying to be a jerk about it, in case it came off that way

yes and no, the instrumentation is different but this c minor progression loop is very popular, there is no melody until the end where i think your progressing fine after arpeggiating the chord.

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A far as listener experience, I think that you strike the right tone with melody and short builup - definitely would like to hear what you will do with the rest of this idea, sweet, catchy and with excelent potential to be develop into a great track/song/production.

Cheers,

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