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artem2222
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criticism welcomed

just made this yesterday, wanted to get some feedback from you guys. Ill take anything I can get.

http://soundcloud.com/rtmofficial/rtm-eff-the-viva


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Old Post Nov-08-2011 15:53  Canada
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ptransmission
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nice track, I like the reverse clap thing. The swells/white noise are a bit loud imo though!

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http://soundcloud.com/project_trans...ission-definite

nice stuff anyway, keep it up,
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artem2222
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i think soundcloud might be down, ill check back in a few


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cheers mate

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artem2222
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lovin the melody and the nice pads underneath. I am no sound engineer but your mix sounds pretty damn good. track skipped a few times, im thinking that might have just happened during the upload process. bass sounded a little too raspy for me during the breakdown but maybe you are going for that kind of thing. Overall pretty impressed, considering that this isn't really my style of music.


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Richard Butler
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RTEM, quite a nice track but I agree the sweeps are a bit loud and also the clap is not gelled into the track. Try and make the main deadmau synth more distinctive as it sounds too 'straight out the tin' just now. I'd recommend careful use of saturated valve simulations to help achieve this.

Nice n clear mix.

The other guy - thats quite a unique track and has some good vibe to it.


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artem2222
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thank you both for the replies, will be making some changes tonight.


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quote:
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nice track, I like the reverse clap thing. The swells/white noise are a bit loud imo though!

be sure to check my tune man, return the favour!

http://soundcloud.com/project_trans...ission-definite

nice stuff anyway, keep it up,
Project Transmission


I loved your track man...more reverb


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ptransmission
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quote:
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I'd recommend careful use of saturated valve simulations to help achieve this.


I know I'm sort of hijacking the thread (sorry!) but this is a good piece of advice, I like it

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I loved your track man...more reverb


Ah, thanks very much man!

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