First track I put here by Johnson Institution (Dance/Electric)
Okay,
Hello everybody this is my first massage to this forum!
Looking forward to it, I heard that this is one of the biggest electronic music-forums there is so it's right place for me :P
Would you give me some feedback on my first track that I put here. Check out some of my other tracks too if you like this!
I'm a sucker for plucks, very nice sounding indeed.
I felt that the build up dragged on alittle, and the pluck started to get lost in all that reverb. I'm missing a crash or an impact of somekind.
Nice melody and overall it sounds good.
Jan-14-2012 16:58
Peter Campbell
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Location: Cairns Highlands, Atherton Tablelands
Wow nice melody you got there, just makes me flot away. I think the track could be squashed together more to keep the listener interested, just my opinion.. well done man
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Jan-14-2012 22:20
JInstitution
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Registered: Jan 2012
Location: Lohja
quote:
Originally posted by Peter Campbell
Wow nice melody you got there, just makes me flot away. I think the track could be squashed together more to keep the listener interested, just my opinion.. well done man
I've been thinking this very same thing! The whole "qlimax-buildup"-part (whatever you call it) should be a bit shorter. But thanks!
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Last edited by JInstitution on Jan-15-2012 at 01:28
Jan-15-2012 01:14
JInstitution
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Registered: Jan 2012
Location: Lohja
Ok now I chopped it bit and replaced the original file Should be better now, or at least more interesting
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Jan-15-2012 02:41
Peter Campbell
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Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Cairns Highlands, Atherton Tablelands
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Originally posted by JInstitution
Ok now I chopped it bit and replaced the original file Should be better now, or at least more interesting
thats a better,, hey try at 16sec to fade or filter sweep that pluck till 39 then open it right up, let it play for 16 beats (that stab sound at 8beats in the middle to keep you hanging.. after the 16beats add the melody... just how I would do it
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