Has all the wup and wop in the right places, so I guess its spot on

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Originally posted by Julz Has all the wup and wop in the right places, so I guess its spot on

and a nice un mastered mix to

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thanks for the listen and feedback guys! glad you think the un mastered mix sounds good too. it does still need some more work on it for sure though

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To be honest, if a song is mixed well it will sound good unmastered or not.
Master just polishes your sound

Comments as I listen

The opening synth is very thin and tinny, and so are the high hats after the snare and kick drop in. I think your snare has way too much going on in the mid range and around 200hz too.

The vocal stutter is wayyy too much man.

I do like the main drop synth. Sounds neat. From this part til the end of the drop it's pretty well executed, but that snare needs to be fixed.

In the break the vocal sample sounds extremely random and out of place.

The drop at 2:50 doesn't have any power when it leads in. It just kinda flops in.

Over all a good effort and I think you could evolve on it and turn it into a full fledged track, just needs work.

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Like the beginning. I don't think you're ideas combine well towards the end.

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