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| quote: | Originally posted by Peter Campbell
that bell arp is a little repitive.
that break is a little long for my liking and at 3:26 you kinder of lose energy in the build up.. |
Yep, agree with you Peter - two of few things I would like to see polished a bit more (improve) before I/we can call it good.
Another one is this unused space in your freq that could be filled with some sweet and wide sounding pad and lots of more FX to improve/spice up listeners experience.
Last think would be the fact that I really didn't feel this movement/energy which comes from your drums and bass line - don't ask me why, don't know it didn't grab the way it should with this type of tracks/genre, maybe the dynamics (as Peter mention above) or maybe mixing is not in the right place yet but this basic concept/idea is fairly well establish/created already - got some nice potential (in my opinion), so good luck with it and let us know when you have your final (and mixed) version up for grab - all the best.
Cheers,
Darek
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