Please check out one of my newest track Im new to this also follow me on sound cloud!! Enjoy and share

Last edited by I0M on Dec-04-2012 at 18:58

Please embed your SoundCloud code in your post !!!!


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Just put the widget in the post sorry about that! http://tranceaddict.com/forums/images/icons/drunk.gif

I will post a bit more after come back from my meeting lol - but so far I can hear some clipping (about 0:19 mark) and some dynamic and freq separation issues --> I like your melodic idea and development so far in this track.

Cheers mate,

Darek

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2:50 to 3:20, really impressive. Felt like headbangin there for a second. the rest needs alot of work. Your hihats, percs and stuff has bad quality, if you are going to use them you have to EQ and tweak them all to perfection, individually.

All in all, has potential, but you need to spend many more hours to make it good, many of those hours on learning how to equalize.

Best of luck! Don't give up, just keep learning.


I've also released a new song, feedback would be nice
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...s=#.UL5UdYOPNOk

Yeah, I would suggest to spend more time on cleaning up your freq before you want me to judge your overall production skills - this EQ issue takes a lot from overall listening experience.

Cheers mate,

Darek

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I would rather you guys judge the sound and style of music.. Im just beginning production and this is only 3 days work. I know is sounds muddy
And also cut me some slack Im running off of a toshiba from 90's and 2 inch ipod speakers lol

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Originally posted by I0M I would rather you guys judge the sound and style of music.. Im just beginning production and this is only 3 days work. I know is sounds muddy And also cut me some slack Im running off of a toshiba from 90's and 2 inch ipod speakers lol

thats what we're doin. we're judging what we're listening to... I love dubsteppy songs, and I think this has potential. Buy a new computer then

Im getting there! The birthday is coming up! Lol and I appreciate it. But its hard to make to make it sound clean when my cpu is glitching thru the whole song and hitting 250% load lmao.. If anyone would like to master and EQ to try and make it sound better be my guest just let me know and I will send you whatever

Lol, of course, it is just friendly suggestion before you will be slam by different guys over here - it is your call.

You should know that when you listen to any music and there is something you don't like (beside style) you switching right away to another track/song and not even bothering to know all the story behind it or what really influence this particular production lol --> so the same rules apply over here, not many people will bother to even listen to your track and not even talking about commenting on it, so again it is your call !!!

Cheers and don't take it to personal as this only should be about beauty of the "MUSIC".


Darek

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Technically it's not a bad track, but as has been mentioned, it's suffering from clipping and lack of clarity in places. That kind of makes this track hard to enjoy which is a shame as you can tell there is a good musical idea behind it.

Just roll back your levels for starters and take it from there.

Cheers
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