So this here is just the intro and 2 subsequent verses of a track im processing into a final version, and I've quite frankly had my ears on it to long and its starting to sound like MUD.

Is there enough dynamic impact in the drum track to give it a pounding presence after the big swoosh of the intro?

Is the mid range sine wave stab conflicting with the panning long dubby saw type synth?

What else do you think about this little clip?

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