The track could be moving a little bit more with some woosh's and cymbals, and you know- a variety of different percussion elements.
But I like your chord progressions, and the divergence after the first drop. The break was filled nicely. The build, executed well. The lead, decent. I'd beef up your fx but overall really solid track.

Now tell me what you think of my new track.. Just got finished with it yesterday. Does it sound too muddy? Or what?

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that's friggin great!! I like that track a lot =)

Hey guys, Thanks for taking the time to check it out.

Ryan,

ur track has got the elements that makes a Song enjoyable, Nice drums, nice lead sounds and FX and risers as well. Gob job, buddy.

You could consider adding vocals to it as that would add variations to your track, After listening to it for a bit, I realized that nothing new would happen in your track. This can cause your listeners to lose attention to ur song and we producers wouldnt want that.

Try to work on some chords variations and diff synth sounds either or you main riff or on ur drop to create that good surprise and keep ur listeners attention till the end of the track.

I´ve done this mistake before and Its quite common when we r starting to produce our tracks, take a look again on my latest track as I have made that variation in the sections from main riff to the drop...

cheers buddy and speak soon!

Hi hat that come's in at 1:00 is abit in ya face, then just drop's to no-where. Take it out, or mix in better. Cord's are nice, but too loud for every-thing else. I think your tune's ok, more FX, and mix it in abit more. Good work keep it up bro ;0)

I Really enjoy this song really nicely done can hear everything clearly and its really just uplifting nice!

here is a latest for me if ya want to check it out

I think this one I got it right, What do you guys think? Cheers!!

https://soundcloud.com/leoluis/leo-luis-reflections

Wow, I really enjoyed that and I must say, absolutely loving the chord progression.

Overall, the track seems really damn solid. Maybe a bit more on the mid/high-bass? Just my thought...

Would you also like to give me some feedback too pls? Would like any thoughts!

Hey bro, thanks for listening. Gonna double check my mids and Highs again...

Your track has a nice Trance vibe, Me like those Hats a lot, altho the snares seems a bit compressed, maybe you cud bring them to life a bit more, Adding another layer, Reverb or a bit more Headroom, Depending on ur mix.

Chords are nice! like it.

Ur arrangement is a bit hmmm I wud say, No so smooth, it seems like you have 2 intros and you could create a bit more energy in your break/build/drop.

you could place your chorus background chords (those after the drop) some bars later the drop. maybe 8 or 16, to create a different energy and bring something new to the track.

Volume is good, maybe slight more, try another maximizer w -1 or -2 T.S in the master chanel and see if it distorts or not.

Good Stuff buddy! keep it up! and I hope my feedback can help you. Peace!

now THAT is feedback!

Thanks big-guy! Appreciated!!!

Just got finished with it yesterday. Does it sound too muddy? Or what?

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