I would like to see feedback on this track!!!

what a shame i thought this forum the feedback rate is higher but....

your track is terrible
what more do you need to know?

Just going by ear, it is pretty good sound wise. The delay on the synth that comes in at the beginning seems off. Also, the synth at the beginning is a little dated to me, but not necessarily wrong for the track. The track seems a little wandering to me, not much of a catchy lead but there are some positive aspects to build on.

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Yo, I like your track better than the original. I wish that main synth would just hit harder bro.

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Originally posted by jayxthekoolest your track is terrible what more do you need to know?

))))))) tks

tks for the feedback

percussions and hihats are weak, the kick sounds empty, you still have a lot of work to do.

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Originally posted by Sexomatic percussions and hihats are weak, the kick sounds empty, you still have a lot of work to do.

has a year this track
tks
I study more )

here is the diff from year to year

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Originally posted by Jono88 ))))))) tks

weird how ppl on this forum are really judgemental of your mixing skill. but i guess being able to mix properly is a better skill to have then talent. it shud be the ideas that count haha just keep working on ur skills and eventually it will sound perfect. what sounds perfect to you might sound like crap to someone else :/