this is a joke right? if not sorry.

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the space kid strikes

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Originally posted by Spacey Orange this is a joke right? if not sorry.

sorry, i don't want to discourage you. you got some excellent sounds down you just need to work on the structure. i'd be glad to listen to anything else you have. cheers.

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UnauthorizedTranceAddict Youtube Channel where I post older mixes from the TA DJ Promotion Forum

My mixes:

Still up:1:2

Down:3:4:5

It sounds like your 303-ish synth and bass is out of beat, that effects the whole rhythm of the song in a very bad way. Try change that (faster attack on the synth or choose another synth - in case you've put the notes right in your sequencer of course) and you'll get a much better song. The sounds in overall are allright, but it's a mess when it's "off beat". Don't give up!