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Pretty solid overall. You really need to change things up though. You really could use some more fx to get more movement in your track. You practically have no builds anywhere. Your main riff works well, but you need to add something over top of it. IE a main melody that you work towards, and then take off with. It sounds simple but take a few of your favourite tracks and copy the structure, copy the techniques they use. Then get creative and make it your own.
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