asshole, this is hillarious!
good song, ths melody is so mysterious and chilled, you beat me sucker

good work

Link's not working

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Uncredible Haak - September 2008 mix

link doesnt seem to work for me:/

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If the link doesn't work for you, either IM me for it at NSXFGC or get if off me from the hub.

The link DOES work, I've just downloaded it..

The song, hmm.. I don't know if it's just me, but it sounds like there's too much reverb on the bass, and that makes it sounds very loud. (this is because I'm listening with headphones)

For the melody, it's a bit the same, maybe you can add more notes?
The strings are VERY nice
Try to make the percussion a bit louder, maybe add some more. That would make the track be more "alive"

Hope this helps you

-ReGrOoVeD

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Downloading now, will take a while tho (56k Bah )

Will post my comments tomorrow

Night Night

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i had my doubts when it started with the heavy bass and all, tho the break and melody is nice. maybe like someone mentioned, some variation every now and then.
overall it sounds nice, maybe a little heavy on the bass.

took some to download, but now ive listened to it and the melody is really nice! maybe it needs just a little more variation. break and build up are good, those strings are great!!
the only thing that you must improve is the bassline (like regrooved and robert said)..ive listened to it with my headphones as well and especially the higher notes of the bassline sound weird. overall, very nice track!
keep it up

john

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what labels? I need to get my friend signed.

i'll edit this post when the download finishes to let u know what i think.

edit: Those strings own. And the little string riffs from whatever little guitar that is owns too. The rest of the song is so so. A killer lead synth and some good leveling should make this a great ass track.

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