Here's a remix I did of a tune DJRavemonkey did, I decided to make it hardstyle for a change

Procyon - FSB (Luke Terry Remix)

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have fun and please comment

Luke

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Last edited by Luke Terry on Oct-20-2002 at 23:38

oh yea, don't download this if you are against swearing

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not 3 bad matey, youve got the makings of a pretty damn good hardstyle tune there.

my only gripes are.... even tho harstyle is not the best made genre in the spectrum, i think that it needs a few more layers on it as it does sound a little bland.
As for the break.. i think that this could be maximised by fading in the build up... then kicks in with dirtier riff, and harder stompin' drums.

apart from that, i think this is rather a cool track, but it just needs spicing up slightly, good werk mate

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Bring it on down son, so you can get done, I got more styles than the miles to the sun,
Ninety three million five thousand flows, and heres one more for the HOoOoOoOOO'S!!!

after been forced to download this tune i thought id beter leave some feedback!

pretty good just a little bit slow but thats just me being picky!

Jon

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Beware of killer hamsters and the random running dogs.

Don't like the way the synths kinda overlap themselves, flow and mastering seem cool though.

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woooooooooooo this tunes goood, very good work


whats films the swearing from?? or did u make it your selvs???

nice work

the main leads abit fruityish but the bass n the rest is awsome the main lead synth needs toughening up & made rougher

nice tune! nice and bangin love the vocals too lol

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Big Dave/little Dave

Sounds cool,

Heres things i think could be made better:

I agree with jay, the track is general sounds abit bland, as in not enuff sound goin on, could be more little effect jobbers.

The kick could be a little mor powerfull and evil.... kinda like the on in this sample i made..

sample

(Yes i know the bass sucks in this sample.. just demonstrating the derb style kick)

The bass line sounds cool, kinda like a SHOKK style, although it sounds weird on my big stereo when i turn it up loud.. sounds kinda distorted but not... ??

Other than that its cool. Those vocals sound mint what uve done with them. and i reckon hard trancers would like it in a club.

thanks for all the comments so far everyone

[N]ûk|êû[Z]: I'll have a fart on with some more effects and stuff

jonsimmonds: Get winamp pitchfork u tosser

oDori: I'm not sure what you mean, please can u explain some more. And I ain't mastered it btw, I'm gonna get a friend at skool to do it for me in his music class

DJ-Ande: The main lead was made in VAZ and is almost identical to the one used in Warduscher - Hardcore Will Never Die (Derb Remix) and I have no idea what the vocal is from, Mike just sampled it for me lol

big dave: cheers

DaveC: I couldn't get a proper Derb kick so I thought this would do, but now I've heard that it would be interesting to change it. I will add some more effects but the stuff I tried to make it more Derb/DJ Isaac style only seemed to clutter it but I will keep fartin on with it. I now see the problem with the bass and that is just the encoding, the wave it fine thank fuck lol

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ok my little review:

-the 2nd kick is a bit 2 loud imo.. it craxx my speakers a bit
-nice bass, but could be a bit more powerfull
-i don`t like the vocals.. dunnow why they`re just 2 loud
-well gotta say.. i really don`t like that main lead, its way 2 weak for an nice hardstyle track.. and its seems like it is a bit false (not the correct notes)

can`t call it an really hardstyle track, i liked ur trancetracks a bit more, sorry

grtz,

mantis

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Originally posted by Project T oDori: I'm not sure what you mean, please can u explain some more. And I ain't mastered it btw, I'm gonna get a friend at skool to do it for me in his music class

First of all: oDrori Hehe, U Euro guys can't pronounce that eh?

2nd: Your friend will only need to turn the mastering from good to excellent though cause this is phine!

3rd what I meant that the main synth feels like each note goes on for two long, perhaps the reverb is too long/loud...

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Originally posted by oDrori First of all: oDrori Hehe, U Euro guys can't pronounce that eh? 2nd: Your friend will only need to turn the mastering from good to excellent though cause this is phine! 3rd what I meant that the main synth feels like each note goes on for two long, perhaps the reverb is too long/loud...

1: yea we're all spanners

2. mint

3: i see what u mean now and have no idea to fix it, i think a new synth probably is in order

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