this track will get better sounds but you can tell me your thoughts about the melody ...

www.geocities.com/melihakturk/ice-eyes-prologue.mp3

copy and paste this to your explorer if the link doesn't work .. i don't know why but it sometimes doesn't work when you click on the link .. www.geocities.com/melihakturk/ice-eyes-prologue.mp3

I only have one problem. The beginning is a little long and sounds a little repetitive. Maybe shorten it, or add more effects. Other than that, it sounds pretty sick! I love the way you have it just explode! I can't wait for the final result.

Hi ya

I liked the melody, given the right sounds that could be turned into an uplifting epic trance tune.

IMO, you're right the sounds do need a change, I'd loose the distorted string synth sound that you have playing when the main beat kicks in half way through the sample. That needs to be a softer melodic synth that builds with the melody through the track.

What you have has a lot of scope, could be played by Armin on ASOT and does the rounds in Ibiza.

Good luck and keep up the good work.

Stella

i like it, sounds professional, but needs alot of work :P

Sorry that i couldn't reply you guys for some time.. i had a problem with my cable modem.. Thanks to all of you who gave it a listen and told me their thoughts.. i'm going to put the track again on this forum when i finish it... it will be much better than this i just started to use Reason 2 so it will take some time for me to make better sounds and etc.. thanks again..

i just had to drop by and comment on your song...
i think the beginning is a bit boring... maybe add variation to it...

other than that... it's awesome man.... great suprise come-in at 1:00!!

I think this song really gonna be a hit if you can improve.
well designed strings & kicks....nice work...

Impressive! Keep it up.

Intro is little boring (maybe more effects solve the problem) but everything else is perfect.

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sebraa

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