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DeZmA
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Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Lalaland

New uplifting track needs your opinion

hi all,

this is my latest track.. I'm waiting to buy a pc but meanwhile i pushed my mc 505 again to it's sequence limit and this is what came out:

right click on the file and click save as
http://users.pandora.be/dezma/Dezma-Promo2.mp3

It is NOT finished, it still needs a lot of mastering and it's recorded way too quiet

Any comment is welcome
thx

Last edited by DeZmA on Nov-24-2002 at 12:03

Nov-24-2002 11:22 Belgium

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DeZmA
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Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Lalaland

Fixed the volume problem a bit..
Don't overwhelm me with replys, one at a time plz

Nov-25-2002 19:22 Belgium

Icone
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium

downloading now, i'll be back later

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Nov-25-2002 19:46 Belgium

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531.am
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Registered: Mar 2002
Location: Austin, Texas TX TA #35

d/l now brb

Nov-25-2002 21:31 United States

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Icone
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium

It sounded ok to me, more or less... The melody isn't exactly what i would call cheer uplifting trance, but it can go by it... just
Synth sounds are ok, but the drums need more work I think. Perhaps a different melody with these synths would make it really uplifting

Good job so far, keep on working on it buddy
Wim

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Nov-26-2002 14:58 Belgium

DeZmA
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Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Lalaland

thx for your review wim,

what exactly do you dislike in the melody? I worked a lot on it and it was hard work to sequence it playing realtime. Anyway I appreciate your honesty

Nov-26-2002 15:56 Belgium

oDrori
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Kibbutz Gaash, home of all the light in Holyland

Nice work, begins a bit boring IMO, melody is pretty nice, don't like the way the bass kicks in after the breakdown though... I don't know if you meant to achieve this but you have a pretty floaty and mixed up choon there!

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Fatboy
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Registered: Jan 2001
Location: London, UK

I really like the melody of this one. A very nice blend of a sad and happy progression. But it does need some serious mastering I feel. The kick is much louder than the other elements, and the rest sounds kind of "mushy"(don't know if that's a word). With some better mixing and mastering this could be great

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trancedfarmer
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Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Seattle, Washington

good song. i like the melody personally, its well thought out.

Nov-29-2002 16:09 United States

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DeZmA
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Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Lalaland

thx for reviews,
fatboy I'm glad you felt the emotion in the melody.. I know it's in need of mastering (melody is way too quiet too) but I just don't have the right equipment to do that right now .. But I'll certainly redo the track when I have a decent studio mixer and pc.

Nov-30-2002 19:30 Belgium